The brief survey completed by participants of my test that collected feedback
The feedback I received (and am still receiving) from my first prototype user test was very helpful. I was told that my language was generally clear and sensitive to my subject, which was a big goal for this iteration, but was told it might be a little too text heavy. Based on feedback, I think a great way to tackle this will be to have better visual separation between the different sections of information. I also think some more iconography would help to make some of this more engaging without it being too lighthearted. Adding visual elements can also help in the accessibility features of this booklet. In the form, I had the users consider a set of posters to be paired with this booklet, but I think I will be ditching that concept due to both time and the fact that I think it might split up information too much.
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